At first, the silhouette in the distance made me think, "Ah, Vader arrives!" lol Then, the more I looked at it, I started hearing that eerie clarinet music in the background from Indiana Jones and the Raiders of the Lost Ark...
great work! only crit i may add is some strong directional lighting on the figures would have worked nicely to pull focus as well as agree with the window lighting. I think a silhouette of a figure in the foreground would have worked really nicely, as well as continuing the path to the foreground, it would give a really nice scale reference and sense of depth.
anyways those are just my ramblings, great work buddy
Thanks a bunch for the help!! Thats a good idea to push out the silhouette more with with some additional light. Always glad to hear some honest opinions! Will keep the things you said in mind for the next ones; )